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Hiya, Interesting concept, but I think it needs work. First up, you need to rectify some typos to make the writing clear. More importantl...

Hi M, A few things: There are a lot of typos and mistakes that need to be rectified; so better proofing is needed. I found Lucille's whol...

Although I don't have good enough Spanish to read the script in its mother language, I read the English description and I think it's a great idea. ...

just a little idea i had, im going write some more on it, this is jut the fist one i thought of

Hi Jon, I'm afraid I'm shooting this myself. Thanks for the offer though!

Tim, assuming you aren't going to film this yourself...how interested are you in having this produced? I'm very interested in shooting this short....

Thanks for your time Cheryl. I honestly missed those sp. errors when I was editing so great catch. I'll remember those from now on. For Ira a...

@ Massiv: Thanks! @Sofluid: Whoops is didn't realize i did that. My bad. It should be fixed now. We are shooting the Call Center stuff in a wee...

Just finished reading! Your style is very polished and easy to follow. Your characters are quite unique and extremely likeable. I especially e...

Great work on the story board. Just one suggestion.. s.l.o.w... down the story board. Felt like I had to speed read the whole way threw. Otherwi...

Hey Jack, This one is especially short, not sure if you read any of the other comments, but it's supposed to be double the length it's at now. I...

There's a new teaser for you guys. I hope you like it.

To be honest my friend, I didn't get any of it! Sorry. It's two short, I have no idea where you are going with the story, and of course if you p...

Howdy Sofluid. First off, I didn't like it that much. Don't take that as a bad thing as such. I think that this sort of piece is an aquired tast...

Hi again sofluid and thanks for your suggestions. At the moment this is only a very rough draft. I take your point about the policeman - I can hon...

Great update! A few things: There is some confusion over the watch scene. Chris tells the boys and Emily that the time has stayed at 12.05 s...

This was funny and would make a good comedic short. I think you need to keep the character names consistent, though. At one point you hop from PHIL...

P.S You might need to add me to the project in the "share" section once you publish it (privately) so that I can see it. I'm currently writing a se...

Thank you awesomeman500. It's going to get a little harder when I put 21st Century Californians up against 17th Century English people! Thanks again.

Vey creative funny and unique you have a really good sense of humor