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This is freakin Hi-larious. I think the ending needs a little work. Just my kind of taste but it was so funny, and then the end just kinda fizzled ...

I can't give you enough praise for this one man. You did a great job of capturing the integrity of Grindhouse cinema. Great job. Richard.

I'd like to see your film of this. It has a lot of nice elements and good twist. I have read a few scripts on celtx, and this is one of the first t...

That was pretty funny.

Vielen Dank dafür - hoffe sehr dass es noch zu einer Verfilmung kommt. .. Und schön, hier Deutsche zu sehen.

I love it. It's gonna be a HIT

Thanks man, I appreciate the feedback.

Great script. Lots of tongue-in-cheek humor; overly dramatic cliches that are surely guilty pleasures; and a rock solid aim at its audience. I enjo...

GREAT screenplay--I'm surprised there aren't any comments already. I'm about one-third of the way through and I can't stop. Your characters and dia...

Good start, my only problem with it I guess would be that Alfred was kind of like Bruce's boss

...You know there's already a Superman Returns movie right? By the way, I like the script :D

The script is kinda weak... But I guess it's a good start.

If you are going to rewrite it, you can get technical points from the forum or script primers. The only thing I'd suggest specifically is to get ri...

Thank you for your praise and constructive criticism; I sincerely appreciate it. I'm glad that at my first screenplay is worth the price of admissi...

Thank you for your praise and constructive criticism; I sincerely appreciate it. I'm glad that at my first screenplay is worth the price of admissi...

EINE KURZE EINFÜHRUNG ZUR VERFILMUNG VON ERWIN UND ELMIRE Die Idee Im Stil des low-budget Bollywood-Kinos soll eine einstündige Verfilmung ...

First off, let me say this is what movies are about. Structurally: tight, interwoven, and while accidental at first- they become occidental whic...

Are you familiar with "Jack of All Trades" the Bruce Campbell series (ill fated as all of his series seem to be)? See: http://en.wikipedia.org/w...

After 13 years of Catholic school and a lot of that sweet cheeba, even a genius such as myself could ever come up with this! I'm down to help out.

I like it, I've been watching the biography channel coverage of serial killers. And the murderer/rapist reminds me of John Wayne Gacy and Gary Ri...