Steven Sallie's Comments
This is writing just for the sake of writing. This is just a story me and a friend...
Love the ending, with the eyes and the smile, like something out of the omen. Good...
Thank you. That did help. And thanks for doing it in a positive, constructive way....
Quick note: If anyone does read this, keep in mind, I was using a different style ...
That sounds very interesting. I think I'll keep up with this project to see where ...
Good. But as I said, the swearing felt "REAL." I mean, some people want to think t...
I'm interested in seeing where this goes. The swearing's a bit much, but IT IS aut...
Great story. I liked the way it was written, and it did have a good messege. I can...
Good script. Great messege. I loved it.
Thank you for the words of help. This was one missunderstanding. I appologize and ...
I am sorry, I did not know that the comments would be placed together, I forgot th...
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GREAT SCRIPT! I've always loved the '60s, the beatles, the summer of love, all tha...