Michael N Phillips's Comments
Thanks to everyone who took the time to read "Pink Elephants" and comment. I've ta...
Hey L&D-
Thanks so much for your comment and the e-mail you sent me. I've written...
Hey btimsah-
Thanks so much for taking time to read Finn and Gil. I took a look f...
thanks, sleepiezzzs for reading another of my scripts. I'm really torn over this s...
m-
thank you, thank you, thank you. you're like my little script writing angle si...
hey prince,
thanks for the comment. my bf read the script last night and had some...
Hey Zepplin,
Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you see the potential of the scri...
hey there,
nice to hear from you.
i'd love to hear about your movie idea. you ca...
Groovy script. You do a great job explaining the action very visually. You were ab...
Hi there.
Thanks for taking time to read my script and give me such good constru...
Hi there.
Thanks for taking time to read my script and give me such good constru...
hey sleepiezzzs,
thanks for reading this script and your comments. I had so much ...
Thanks, Sharkey.
I really appreciate you taking time to read the script. I want t...
hey sharkey-
nice idea. i agree with your concept of depressing charity commercia...
one more thing. reading your story made me think of a book i recently read called ...
groovy story. i like robby's tone throughout. is there a reason why darla has no d...
m.boss
thanks for taking the time to read my script. i appreciate your feedback a...
hey m-
thanks again for your read and advice. i've been worrying so much about ho...
hey dillon, thanks for the comments. all gay people share the common thread of gro...
thanks for reading. i'm not sure how to take your comment but, I think it's not en...
hi there. like this beginning. i have a sense of shaw and perhaps why he's doing w...
hey there. great job so far. i really like what i read. it's easy to follow, the d...
Hi there. Thanks for reading and offering your criticism. Working in procreation h...
adriano-
thanks for the comment. finn and gil is a page right out of the story of...
thanks for your comments, meotsuburu. you've given me a lot to think about that co...
Hi there. I love what you've written! It really evoked a lot of emotion for me. Th...
hey massive. really like the tone of guatam. he's seemed to have accepted his soci...
funny story. i'm not sure dave would have stayed asleep while sue exacted her reve...
really liked your script. your dialogue is fresh, funny and flows very easily. the...
hey dp,
yes, let's. i'm thinking that the boys should try to find frankie a boyfr...
hi there, psearle,
good start. i love the opening scene with paul and they older ...
Love, loved your script. I almost found myself reading too quickly at times becaus...
Sharkey-
Thank you so much for the second read and the constructive criticism. Yo...
Nice story. Surprising twist.
I'm a bit confused about Cole's age. At the beginn...
Good read. It really kept me on my toes. I think some of the dialogue could have b...
nice short story. very powerful. i think your pacing and flow were good, but i had...
hey there. good story so far. i'm very interested to see what happens between mich...
hi there. thanks for reading.
i've struggled with amelia since i started writing...
Thanks for reading the script and your constructive criticism.
Yes, Frankie is w...
Maybe Gil, Finn, Frankie and Amelia could take a road trip to Los Angeles in searc...
Thanks for your comment. Being like Gil, do you have suggestions for him or his in...
hey sheila-
thank you very much. please let me know if you need anything else fro...
Yes, you can capitalize the name if it's possessive. But only the first time a cha...
Send me your resume and I'll definitely keep you in mind for the part of Finn. :) ...
thanks for the comments.
I've been struggling with the ending for awhile. I've g...
Love what you've written so far. I actually found myself reading too quickly becau...
I can't say I was happy about what you wrote, but you did give me some good food f...
Thanks, Massive. I had so much fun writing this and I'm reallly glad that you enjo...
funny story. i think everyone has a mcdonalds tale to tell. one thing i thought as...
hey there. really liked the concept but, i was left wanting to know more. was ther...