Mitchell's Comments
wow this is really good.
great idea for a story, the dialogue is very natural and...
great concept for a movie... i definately enjoyed reading this
some things do nee...
thanks heaps for the comments... ill try to take it all on board
i have found c...
looks good but i have to say i think it would definately work better as a short st...
love the storyboard
you're a very very talented illustrator
and a great writer t...
looks great so far
im only new to this so i dont know if i can offer any criticis...