japostol's Comments
The overly dramatic situation works to build the comic effect. I would have liked ...
Dialogue heavy, or action heavy, ALL anime/manga is VISUALLY driven. Whether they'...
Have to agree with wayne17. Had that Omen "feel" to it but not as obvious as that ...
Thank you so much, saptarsi, for taking the time to review the project. At the mom...
No problem. There's a great tutorial in the forums with lots of links to resources...
Very schizophrenic. I enjoyed it a great deal. Your style of writing kept me enter...
Wow. Is this your first script? If it is, it's way better than my first attempt.
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Initially, I wouldn't. My goal would be to lead the audience into thinking that th...
LOL @ your OBS! That's a GREAT POINT. I don't really know. I'm going to have to wo...
Finally finished this one. Thanks, Sheila, for providing the Google Translate link...
I didn't realize you cut scenes. I looked over the 1st draft. It does personalize ...
Ah... It becomes clearer. I read the 2nd draft (not the 2nd draft with the revised...
There are tons of technical critiques on this one so I won't even enter that realm...
First of all, thank you for reading and commenting on my script. I really apprecia...
I think it starts out great, but this is under the assumption that things will beg...
congrats chucky! well deserved.
It's rough but it's amazing so far! I'm truly impressed. There are so many things ...
Looking forward to reading your scripts. Hopefully, I'll have a comic book script ...
Wonderful! This must have taken a lot of work. I really appreciate the time and ef...
That sounds like a good idea. I'm working on another script right now (my first at...
Quirky short. I enjoyed it. Might have stretched the combo thing a little far but ...
Brilliant. Funny and strange. Aside from the occasional typo, it was well written....
Upon reading your script, initially in IE, I was kinda thrown off by the big block...
Switched to Firefox when viewing CELTX scripts on Project Central. With IE there i...
What? Theo? LOL. Definitely changes my guess. I'll PM you.
Very cool universe you've created. Am not very familiar with the comic book format...
LOL. I know how you feel.
I tried to display, in the parole hearing scene, that Gabe was kind of "reciting" ...
Reminds me of Steamboy. I'm curious if that was your intention. Good luck on shoot...
Hurry up and write it M! That intrigues me even more! LOL.
Seriously tho... ahh...
Witty, funny, natural dialogue. Very effective at comparing/contrasting the twins....
Good premise and a pretty solid start. Unfortunately, I couldn't continue because ...
Romcoms aren't usually my thing but I couldn't help noticing that your project was...
Or is this your second screenplay? If it is... Then... Solid SECOND attempt. LOL. ...
Just finished reading your script. Solid first attempt (You should have read my ve...
It kinda reminded me of a Russ Meyer flick (B-movie/sci-fi/sexploitation/comedy). ...
I'm sorry if that came off as a criticism (about the amount of dialogue)! It wasn'...
Good action and slapstick. Funny. I agree with meotsuburu, though. It gets confusi...
Agree with HeavensSword. Looking forward to reading more.
Interested in reading where you go with this...
In my opinion, it starts off wi...
I enjoyed this script! The diaologue (which I dug) is complimented nicely with the...
I see what you mean... Thanks. If I do incorporate a geaneology it will be basic.....
nice... very interesting... go broad at first (narrative) and then focus on the fa...
That's true. I had a hard time deciding whether or not to include
explicit materi...
That's a good idea! That would take some MAJOR rewriting though.
Hahaha! Sounds l...
Yes. I'm trying to beef up the back story (more history on some of
the main chara...
Nice. Maybe add a brief back story... The girls are in a plastic surgery clicic or...
I finally figured out that this was for the #13 competition (sorry, I'm new to Cel...
Great action short! Nice twist with the confession. Very well written. I'm going t...
Wow! I am impressed by how technically well this is written. A great take on the c...