Chelle's Comments
This was an interesting update. We get the impression that, despite Joanne's dad g...
Another great update. I like Britney's character - very amusing! Looking forward t...
Great update! Can't find fault in it, unless I'm nit-picking. And in that case I o...
Please bare with me if there is text missing at all... I lost the Celtx file for s...
Great update...
I can't believe how good this screenplay is compared to your ot...
Hiya,
Interesting concept, but I think it needs work.
First up, you need to...
Hi M,
A few things:
There are a lot of typos and mistakes that need to be r...
Great update!
A few things:
There is some confusion over the watch scene. C...
This was funny and would make a good comedic short. I think you need to keep the c...
P.S You might need to add me to the project in the "share" section once you publis...
Hi!
Thanks for the positive comments!
I'd love to see your idea :)
Well, I definitely see a great improvement in your writing. It's much more maturel...
Wow, this was great!
I think you made a strong start here. You've introduced al...
This was very interesting... A bit gruesome but definitely effective!
I agree t...
I totally agree... If I hadn't joined Celtx I wouldn't have learnt nearly as much ...
Thanks you so much!
I'm so glad the imagery and the emnotions they create have ...
P.S I just realised something...Ignore my "for a beginner (I read your profile) yo...
Ah, I see... I hadn't heard of that competition (being British) but I wish you loa...
He he! I'm afraid I haven't got round to much of my own writing recently... I read...
OK, here's the rest!
Luke's character needs working on: we need to understand h...
He he, I make up words all the time, so I totally see where you're coming from the...
Sorry, just realised the above comment doesn't specify which "shawty" I was talkin...
I love this. I love the way you write. You portray the argument really well and up...
Hiya,
I like the way you have tackled issues such as depression and have queri...
Sorry about my dire use of the English language just then - that's what you get wh...
Thanks, Caro :)
I'm sorry I didn't give specific examples as to my criticisms b...
You are a strange one, fliptopbox ;)
First up, I'll explain a few things about ...
Thanks!
It will be a hard slog because I will have to work a normal job alongs...
Hi Dillon...
I just wanted to apologise if I came on a bit too harsh in my mes...
Hi, Bruce!
Thank you so much for that - now I see what Caro meant by what she s...
I think you should stop harassing people by asking for reviews via people's person...
Hi! Fantastic job!
You certainly have a talent there!
I love the whole thing...
I am very impressed at what you've written, and you're only 16 - well done you! Yo...
P.S What bits did I misunderstand? Maybe if you explain them I can see if I really...
Thank you for your praise regarding my descriptions! That's exactly what I was aim...
Will do! I'll try and look out for your project when you update it, as I want to k...
It's no problem! I genuinely am really enjoying reading it and will read and criti...
I see, so it's all a kind of metaphore for what's going on in real life? If that i...
Thank you for that Cherylology :) Although you mustn't say nice things just becaus...
I've only read half of this screenplay so far, but I must say I am impressed. You ...
He he, each to their own! This piece was a highly stylised attempt at a cheesy com...
I liked this one too. I really admire your writing. For what could have been a bor...
He he, liked this. Not that I got all the references (I was born in 1985) but all ...
I really liked this. I thought it was well-paced and a very interesting and exciti...
I think the actions were fine, but I do agree about the ending and how un-responsi...
I really like this. It is incredibly powerful imagery-wise and message-wise and I ...
I really enjoyed this. I've only read 101 - Chemistry so far. It's exactly the typ...
I liked the excitement after the characters noticed the fire, but this script need...
Ignore him, I think you set up the scenes perfectly fine. There's not need to go s...
Hi. Interesting concept, but I think you really need to work on your screenwriting...