Gautam Sharna's Comments
There is an abundance of cliche lines that makes me think of the old batman movies...
hey, I think this script has potential, certainly the writing style is one that I ...
haha that was funny, I liked it.
That was really interesting I have to say. I agree it is Lynchian. Keep up the goo...
I liked your script, but there are a few things you could improve on. By making th...
wow, that was pretty cool.
i've made significant changes to it, hopefully it is better
I hate to be critical, but that's how we grow, right? I agree with the above posts...
This was pretty well-written, but it is very similar to the film 'The Others' star...
My bad, I hadn't finished reading when I posted earlier, and I see that you have f...
Hey, I thought the idea of his signature weapon being a metal baseball bat was rea...
I would absolutely appreciate the collaboration, but I'm not sure how that would w...
I replied to your offer. check the limitless script
Hey, I didn't get any reply. Sorry for writing on your script, I don't know how el...
Hey! Thanks a lot for all the comments. Its exactly what I need. I'll definitely g...
Hey, that was a pretty good story! but did Xandra know who the killer was, or was ...
I was actually inspired by the story 'The Veldt' by Ray Bradbury. But a few things...
Hey, I didn't quite get this one. You obviously have a flare that makes cliche sit...
also, razorneck, what about the payoff could I change to make it more powerful? Wh...
hey thanks a lot for the comments. I'll definitely get to work on this stuff.
I like the original twist where the infected can actually speak. It adds more of a...
Woah.... that was a pretty creepy ending. Damn, it was original too. I would like ...
Wow, what can I say. Incredibly tasteless and vulgar, but also incredibly clever a...
hey, so far the story actually gripped me. I found Jaime do be endearing and the d...
Wow, that was really cool. For the scenes where he traces the pipe's pathway, you ...
This is very witty and if done well with appropirate camera angles and good actors...
I thought there were some funny moments in this, like when Bobby is told not to st...
Wow, very interesting turn. It could really look cool when turned into a short fil...
Hey, I really appreciate your comments. The technical aspects are very important i...
It was a good screenplay, pretty realistic and interesting. The only thing is the ...
Okay, I tried to change it a little. Add more life to it. What do people think?
I am quite new at this, being a senior in high school. But thanks for the advise! ...
That was a really well done script! You dealt with a touchy issue quite nicely, an...